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Fear and Pain

10 Mar 2010 14:21:22

One of the most scariest of my days have arrived...
I never was so much deeply scared...

What has happened to a lively person like me...
Who was an inspiration to many...

I dont know what has happened...
Finding a place where I can turn my head...

Loneliness has gripped me like a python...
Which is suffocating to stop my breath on...

Tears are rolling down my eyes like river...
Pain has gripped my mind with its powerful lever...

I am feeling quite cold as the atmosphere is hot...
Waiting for someone to hold my hand who has brave heart...

Crying like a kid I am praying...
Will I ever come out of this suffering...

I want to speak about my fear to someone...
Still afraid I am kept waiting by everyone...

I was always there when anyone wanted...
But still I am left alone as haunted...

I am expecting some miracle to happen...
To lift and bring smile back to my face skin...

God come down and have a chat...
I want someone near and give a pat...

God help me and send me your angel...
I am in heavy pain which is eating me all...

I will blame the lord if something happens bad...
That day will turn off my faith from lord...

My life has become a question...
Answer to this has become a pain...

Help me...help me....

Moral : Fear and pain has gripped.


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preeti Says:
22 Mar 2010 at 22:19:06
good poem...and touching tooone suggestion, try to make it a little bit more rhyme :) just it sounds soothing to the ears ..
Pal Says:
22 Mar 2010 at 22:46:11
Nice poem........
Vijay Says:
22 Mar 2010 at 23:17:04
Hey nice poem...............Something that touched my heart...Keep writing Dude....ME here
Ketan Says:
23 Mar 2010 at 10:23:00
@Vijay : Thanks a lot man...

@Pal : Thank you.

@preeti : Yes I will keep that in mind about the rhyming.
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Bhatta Says:
02 Apr 2010 at 09:56:33
wtf happened to u man...everything is in out hands..its all we shape things...:)
Ketan Says:
02 Apr 2010 at 13:03:40
@Bhatta : Yes..Thank you...