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Alone in Pain

03 Jun 2010 00:13:09

Note: Just an outburst of emotions... when i was alone at 12 midnight...

It hurts when you are left out...
I felt the same last day ...

Dont know the feeling was so bad...
It created a sense of a feeling very sad...

Can i express myself to you ...
I never was given a chance by you...

Should i hold myself as good...
I was made realize that i am bad...

Nothing i did you behaved like this...
What would have happened if i were this...

Strange feeling of being alone..
Has embraced me from all one...

Am i destined to be alone without you...
May be yes i am forced by you...

Please forgive me if i was wrong...
Like a big heart can you break this tong...

I want to talk to you again...
Like the fresh pouring rain...

Am i worth to be given another chance...
It is painful to be alone in this avalanche...

Dont keep me waiting ...
My inner self is paining...

I am not able to hide the moist in my eye...
I will keep it till you bring your hands to dry...

Moral : Will the pain fade away soon.


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Niki Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 00:24:38
Who is hurting you? can i make some guesses...
Kamaljeet Singh Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 09:33:28
nice expression of emotions...keep it up buddy
Bharath Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:09:09
Is this Pain is just by a frnd./././
sandy Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:33:30
nice lines ..
Guna Says:
03 Jun 2010 at 10:54:59
Don't feel dear.. We are all with you...
Ketan Says:
04 Jun 2010 at 14:04:46
@Niki - You cannot make any guesses
@Kamaljeet Singh - Thank you mate
@Bharath - Hah ha ha..who should i say..
@Sandy - Thanks mate
@Guna - Thank you
nethra Says:
04 Jun 2010 at 23:37:41
Truly sad! (
Ketan Says:
05 Jun 2010 at 19:36:16
@Nethra Yes it was a sad moment
Anup Says:
07 Jun 2010 at 17:38:28
Dont worry Ketan..everything will be alright !!
Sunanda K Says:
07 Jun 2010 at 21:30:02
The poem is awesome :)
Ketan Says:
09 Jun 2010 at 14:36:09
@Anup: Thanks man

@Sunanda K :Thank you very much
Vidya Says:
02 Jul 2010 at 15:43:18
gud poem.....bt hope its nt by true emotions....
Ketan Says:
03 Jul 2010 at 01:02:55
@Vidya : Thank you for the appreciation. It is the emotion matters. Whether it is true or created or imagined. What it matters the writing creates the magic of real. Enjoy.
niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:02:31
this is awesome man.....it says so many things...directly touching d heart...full on emotion/expression
niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:07:01
this is awesome man.....it says so many things...directly touching d heart...full on emotion/expression
niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:07:16
this is awesome man.....it says so many things...directly touching d heart...full on emotion/expression
niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:07:19
this is awesome man.....it says so many things...directly touching d heart...full on emotion/expression
niraj Says:
14 Jul 2010 at 21:07:19
this is awesome man.....it says so many things...directly touching d heart...full on emotion/expression
Ketan Says:
16 Jul 2010 at 23:03:31
@Niraj : Thanks mate
Nilesh Sardar Says:
21 Jul 2010 at 23:14:15
I can feel how you can feel. And i know for sure that these are true feelings. Dont know whether i shud say that written it well..
Sunanda Says:
23 Jul 2010 at 23:16:13
The poem is awe-inspiring :)
Ketan Says:
25 Jul 2010 at 02:25:23
@Nilesh Sardar : Thank you man. Feelings are always innder..It always comes from within.

@Sunanda : Thank you for the appreciation
Natalie Says:
26 Jul 2013 at 23:27:29
The Final Friday Docktail Parties are a HUGE SUCCESS!!! A BIG Shout Out goes out to CRAIG BRIDGES for your part in making the Sarasota Sailing Squadron THE PLACE TO BE on the FINAL FRIDAYS of the month. It's a great time with a great band (from 7:30-10:00pm) and great fredins. And is family friendly, too. We wouldn't miss it.
http://flaglerforums.com/activity/p/319716/ Says:
10 Oct 2013 at 09:35:57
Alone in Pain
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